Because of many people complained about my grammar(sorry for that)… I decided to make revision….
there are lots of confusion because of my writing skill… So I’m revising the first part of the book..
It will take some time to revised all of it because of my work, but I will make revision… slowly but sure…
I was hoping that I can finished the revision in a month, and write the next part of the story…
so please be patient guys and keep giving me feedback to improve the story…
the download isn’t revised yet.. I’m planning to do that when the story finished and upload a new book 1…
thank you…
Rebirth Online World 