Rebirth Online World Second Contest of Chain story!
The contest ends on wednesday9:00am GMT +7. The winner will be anounced the day after the contest ends.
Rules:
- Write no more than 100 words
- Can’t write for two post in a row
- Have a comments approved on the site prior the contest
- It should be made in comments NOT REPLY.
- State your post number
Corrected example:
Introduction story
User 1,post #1 bla bla bla
User 2, post #2
User 1, post # 3
User 3, post #3 (will still be judged)
User 2,post #4 should continue from user 1
User 4, post #5 post more than 100 words (disqualified)
User 3, post #6 continue from user 4
User 1, post without post number (disqualified)
User 2, post #7 continue from user 1
User 5, post #8
User 5, post #9 (disqualified)
User 3, post #10 continue from user 5
The prize is:
One chapter of your choice, it could be any machine translated or original works.
The winner is someone who have :
- creative and original story idea
- control the flow of the story
- The one with the most ‘unique’ words.
These three points will be the judging criteria.
Creative and original is a must,we’re entering a new galaxy here.
Control the flow of the story as you wish, someone is trying to create a great setting? Destroy it with your evil mind!
What is ‘unique‘ words? Words that is unusual, and couldn’t be understood without opening the dictionary for their meaning. Hahahahaha.
So, we might have more than one winner based on the each criteria or only one excellent winner who dominate the judging criteria..
Disqualified if:
- Write two post in a row
- Exceed 100 words in each post
- Failed to mention post number
- Haven’t commented before (your post won’t be approved)
Full explanation can be found here..
Here is the introduction story..
It was a sunny day when I decided to go out of my room and enjoy the sunlight. Usually I didn’t wake up this early but today I have to go to Akihabara to buy the new moe princess figurine.
“It’s such a good day. ”
I stretch my arm to refresh my body. Because I will be waiting at the line to buy it. Although it is still 5 am in the morning and the shop open at 8am, the amount of people lined up is already more than a hundred. I even saw some people making tents and sleep the night in front of the store. Suddenly, I heard something.
*Siren sound*
” What happened? ” a man behind me asked his friend.
” I don’t know, look! ” then he points out to the street where the commotion sound come from.
People are running. They clearly didn’t do this to exercise because the expression they wear is in panic.
” Everyone, Run! ”
The line in front of me suddenly reduced to zero. Of course they are all running. Why I didn’t run away? Of course it was because I want to buy moe princess figurine and I have to get it no matter what happened. Be it monster, aliens, meteor, the end of the world or even other world summoning couldn’t stop me from getting it today.
People are running in panic but I just stood there. I silently hummed the moe princess opening sound.
LA LA la~
No matter what happened I will save the world because I am.. Moe Princess!
No matter what happened I will be your saviour because I am.. Moe Princess!
You can be like me, you can be moe, you can be a princess.. You just have to say..
Moe Princess.. and now, start your imagination engine!
(PS: IS THE THEME SO ABSURD TILL THE STORY LOOPING ITSELF? LOL)
Rebirth Online World 
Post #1
How lucky i am! Suddenly the line is gone. Now i can buy the moe princess figurine whitout waiting anymore!!… is what i thought but the storekeeper is gone too..!! Hell you know? After all my effort to camp outside the store….. then i just need to ‘take’ my figurine and give the money later.
But suddenly the sky turned grey and time stop without freezing me
“Yay, all your moe princess are belong to me”
Just as I reach out to grab one I feel a sharp pain in my chest.
I look do to see the foot of one of the moe princess figurines sticking out – cutely – of my chest.
“Why do the things I love always hurt me?”
DISQUALIFIEDPost #2 (Continuing from h2h1zzz)
I reach up to the figurine foot and do the obvious thing. Hmm? You say leaving it alone and getting to the hospital is the obvious thing? Nonsense!
Anyways~ I’ll just reach up and.. hmm? It’s stuck? Is this divine punishment? Kami-sama, I was only going to borrow one! Look at them! How could anyone resist?
… Actually, now that I look at the figurines and back at the foot in my chest, isn’t the foot nearly twice as big? I could’ve sworn when I first saw the foot it was the same size as the figurines’….
Post #3
The world was in ruins. Not really, but there obviously was some sort of apocalyptic force at work here. Otherwise, how would you justify 4000 life-sized Moe Princesses suddenly swarming the street?
“GYAAAHHH!!!”
“NOOO~~~~!!!!!”
Everything suddenly stopped, leaving only a soundless and colorless world. Strangely, my chest also stopped hurting. The Moe Princess’s foot was still sticking out of it though. Huh.
[Temporal Intervention Protocol Initiation Successful]
[Stabilizing]
In front of me, something else appeared from the empty space.
[It is not the time for you to fall yet, my lady]
It talks, too.
Post #4
It was a life sized Moe-Princess
“M-Moe Princess!!”
SMACK
My head got hand-chopped
“No! I am the God!” shouted the Moe-Princess
“B-but?!”
SMACK
“Just shut up and listen first! You will die at this rate. At your chest is the portal that will summon the Demon Queen. You will have to close it to prevent the destruction of humanity. All those small soldier of hers is currently going to rip your chest out. So, be careful!” she said to me while pointing at the 4000- or so figurines around me.
“T-then what should i do?”
Thanks zed for getting it back on track lol
Post #5
KAPOW!
The God (tentatively) was sent away with a roundhouse kick.
[Please do not listen to her!]
Said the robot-like thing in front of me
[That is no God, but Demon Queen herself in disguise!! She is trying to deceive you in order to regain her True Form! I cannot allow such thing, for I have travelled back in time to prevent it!!!]
The Robot striked a pose like some sort of oldschool masked hero.
I just want my Moe Princess figurines, though….
“I’ll leave it to you then~”
SMACK!
I was smacked on the forehead again.
Post #6
“No! Don’t trust the robot!!”
Then she got kicked again. “No! Don’t trust her!!”
Then they started to fight in front of me while a leg still stuck on my chest.
“CUT!! CUT!! RETAKE!! THIS IS TOO CONFUSING!!” a loud sound was heard from the sky.
“”But! Snowfallsdown-sama?!”” shouted both the robot and princess together.
Then the world turned blurry…
I was back on the line again…
*Siren sound*
” What happened? ” a man behind me asked his friend.
” I don’t know, look!”
People are running in panic.
“Eh seriously? I went back in time?”
Post 6#
“What can i do? I’m just an usual otaku who love moe princess!!”
SMACK!
gyaaa!! Another smack and i been thrashed to the store wall
“Humanity is in your hand, you fool!! Dont let her get you!” Said the robot.
Then…… what will i do is….
lock myself on my room with my moe princess figurine!!
Hell with humanity!! I want my moe princess and only that!!
Will still be judged but the other should continue from zed post#6 Kurotsubaki could post another after someone is posting #7Post #7
“Uuuuu~ S-so confusing!! First the Moe Princess appeared, then a robot… wait, did the robot come first or the Princess…? Ah, whatever! Since the line in front of me is cleared, I’ll just help myself to a Moe Princess figurine and be on my way~“
As I reached my hand towards the boxes…
“Uee~h?! There’s a Moe Princess’ life-sized foot sticking out of my chest again? And time seems to be stopping too…”
–After about a dozen angry shouts from Snowfallsdown, followed by a dozen repeats—
*Siren sounds*
“JUST GIVE ME MY MOE PRINCESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!”
Post #8
Feeling tired with the loop, I force my way to the store, take one of Moe Princess figurine, put it on the floor, and kneel down in front of it
“Ooooohhhh my goddess ‘Moe-Princess’, please give me your guidence….”
Suddenly, the figurine shine so brightly. It’s so bright that I have to cover my eyes and when I open my eyes, I can,t believe what I see….It’s Moe-Princess
“The chosen one….Would you be my ally?”
asked Moe-Princess.
Just like that, I nod and that day…….
A Moe-Prince is born
Post #9
“Your power is coursing through me. It’s amazing!” I said to Moe Princess while kneeling.
“Ufufu~ It is as expected. By my power, I have judged that your love for me is strong. As such, I have entrusted my Moe power to you, O dearest one. Please protect the world for… Fwuumph~~!!!!??”
In the middle of her speech, I used Ropes of Moe magic to tie and gag her up.
“Guheheheheheh!!! Finally, finally!!!! The real-life Moe Princess is MINEEEEEEE!!!!!”
My face distorted into that of a yandere’s while I laughed hysterically. Rather, wasn’t that my real face?
Post #10
Suddenly the rope break with a dazzling light…
“Y-you!! How dare you use my Moe power to harm me?!” said the Princess as she pointed in anger at me.
“I-it’s because i love you!!!”
“As the punishment, i will change you into a woman!!”
“W-wha?! N-nooooooooo!!!” i screamed as a flash of light fall onto my body.
My hair got longer…
My body got smaller and rounder on some edges…
My breast got bi- nevermind…it bulged up slightly…
My body had changed completely into a woman…
Even my little brother was gone when i rub it…
Post #11
Suddenly the ground began to tremble. I shrieked in surprise as I was suddenly left unsteady, trying to balance myself. The trembling grew stronger and stronger and as I looked up in the distance a crowd of men was coming my way. Some were holding cameras, some holding…wait…is that a sailor uniform? Call it a woman instinct but something told me to start running…
Post #12
“Wait a moment!!!!!”
suddenly, another voice appear just before I run.
“Kaa-sama……”
Moe-Princess face turn pale while facing the owner of the voice, her mother
“I think I make it clear to you to bring your destined one, a man that would support you and be your strongest ally, but what the hell you are doing?”
said the mother angrily
“But….H-he try to do this and that, I just can’t take it. He,s so disgusting. He deserve this, so he could understand girl’s feeling”
Post # 13
The mother sighed, and looked at me in pity…wait…pity? why?
“Oh dear…looks like you used the forbidden arts too…” she muttered shaking her head.
I look to Moe-Princess with a puzzle look, but she merely avoided looking at me.
“What does she mean?” I ask, fear and dread creeping upon me.
“No-nothing” Moe-Princess replied. I tried to get her to face me, but no matter which angle i looked at her from, she avoided my gaze
“I just…you know…kind of cursed you” Moe-Princess said as if it was a small thing.
“WHAT?!” I yelled.
“Hmph…serves you right…pervert…” she said.
Post #14
“No matter what kind of clothes you wear, you will always seen naked by other people,” said the mother.
“W-what?!”
“Just go and get raped!!!” shouted Moe-Princess
“F-forgive me!!! I-i only love you so much that i want to take you for myself!!” i tried to plea to them.
BOOOM
A robot suddenly fall from the sky, it was the robot that tried to save me from the Demon Queen!
“I have come to save you!! Again!!” he shouted while striking a kamen rider pose.
Post#15
“Help me……AGAIN????? isn’t that supposed to happen in another loop???!!!”
This loop…that loop….mixed together
I am cursed in to a woman
My thought was trown into a chaos
Without thinking, I hit the robot as hard as I can
“You are not suppose to appear here! You baka!! BAKA!!!!!!”
Post #16
The ground began shaking as everything went into turmoil
“O my god! Ehhat Duh Well Is Jast?”
Is what i muttered with my fingers in my mouth.
The sky which is previously gray now turned a dazzling white with a bit of golden radiance
“Is this what the supposedly savior who will stop the chaos that is happening rig-”
As was i saying that, something came out. It has no ‘body’ as it’s so huge and a thing that seems to be a tentacle of an octopus elongated and entangled the thousands moe princesses.
POST #17
“KAAAAMEEEHAAAMEEEHAAAAA!!” a shout was heard together with a dazzling beam of light.
“I-is that S*n-G*ku??” i said.
“H-he is our savior!!” said the Moe Princess beside me.
“People!! Give me your help!! I need to borrow your spirit!” shouted the orange clothed guy.
We all lift our hand up to give him our power.
Post #17
The tentacels try to attack me
I don’t know what to do
I fall into despair and start crying
“Hiks…hiks…..I don’t want this hiks….I just simply love moe-princess hiks…it can’t be help that I want to monopolize her so badly hiks..I’m sooorry.”
“Do you really regret your action?”
“Y-yes”
“Very well”
Moe-princess flick my forehead and the tentacels perrish and I back to be a man
Will still be judged but the other should continue from zed post#17Post #18
The moment i came back as a man, i was so ecstatic that i did not notice Son Godick up top.
“Wha, what are you doing you pervert!”
Feeling once again the symbol of a man i was so happy i immediately threw myself trying to embrace moe-princess into a hug.
“!”
Why is she quiet? When i looked up, her face is red like of a rippen tomatoe upto her ears. I wonder what’s wrong, is she perhaps sick? No, that cant be, hm?
I am confused, so i will just resume it somehow
Post #19
Then the world turned upside down, my head rolled down and i saw the Princess holding a bloody sword in her hand. I also saw my headless body somehow.
‘Am i dead?’ i thought to myself.
“How dare you touch me naked,” said the Princess as she spit on my head that lay on the ground.
My vision turned black, now i am dead.
Post #19
Seeing her red face, I can’t help but want to push her down. She is just too MOEEEEEE!!!!!!
Thankfully a little laughing voice drag me bact to reality
“Fu..fu..fu.. how agresive you are. My daughter is a girl whose time spent as a single is the same with her age”
Can’t believe what her mother just said
Moe Princess yell
“Ka-sama!!!H-how could you….embarrased me in front of this pervert!!!!!!!!!!!”
Will still be judged but the other should continue from zed post#19Huh? I dont get yours
and I dont really know where im heading to myself. The previous comment said something about songoku shit. I want it to have a bit of mixture of romance so thats why.
Post #20
Dark, void, nothingness.
As i regained my conciousness, i was in a dark room ‘well i cant exactly say if this is actually a room’ with no nothing at all.
“Sigh- princess?”
I asked.
Theres no response. I tried walking but i dont know if im moving cos the ground isnt visible for me to see.
“Is anyone there? Can anybody hear me?”
I kept asking. There might at least ‘anything’ here that can tell where i am right now right?
“Greetings, boya”
the story is getting abusrd.. Let me get it back on track.Post#21
"Don't be affraid. For I am a God. "
" Liar. I've met with two fake God today. Why should I believe in you? "
" Hahaha. Don't worry. What happened today is the work of evil. Now, as a compensation you are free to chose to be reincarnated into another world. "
" Really? "
" Yes, now... Please go to the other world. "
I can feel my consciousnes is fading..
" No, I haven't choose what I am going to be reincarnated to. "
" Don't worry. Let your imagination run wild. "
(Ps: time remaining 12 hours 24 minutes..)
Post #22
My conscience started to fade…maybe I should do just as that God(fake) told…
…
…
I’m so happy, the new otome game is finally coming out! I even went through the trouble of camping in front of the store…
Right! It’s finally time! Onwards to “Heart sindicate”!
…For some reason that doll in the store looks awfully familiar…
Post #23
‘Huh? Wa-wait! …Im back?’
I tried checking if this really was real. As looked down i saw 3 sticks, the other 2 are moving.
‘Wait, it moves when i thought it to’.
And when i saw my stature in one of the building’s reflection, my mouth fell down and i completely went dumbfoundedly blanked.
“I became a… walking stick…?’
Can’t we make this at least more interesting? we still got 12 hours after all, and please make it at least connect even a little with the post before…
Post #24
BOOM, i got run over by a truck and died again.
I came back to the space where the God was, he sat there and looked at me with disgust. “Really? i told you to reincarnate, and you became a stick? I killed you once again, so now go think a lot. I will reincarnate you after that! If you become something stupid again. I will send you to hell!”
Post #24
‘Huhu’
Zhoom
As i came back, i once again check of what i have become.
‘Hahahahaha’
A magical branch!
At least im more thicker and has magic now! Arent i like those fairies in fantasies? They said theyve made up entirely of magic, and so i am! Great, great.
‘I wonder if i evolve id grow into a wonderful tree, like the yggdrasil?’
Alright! …Eh? Where am i now?
Post #25 (Continuing from Zed’s Post #24)
I know! I’ll reincarnate as Moe Princess’s little sister! FOCUS! Moe Princess! Everything’s fading… MOE PRINCESS!!!
As my mind slowly clears, I quickly observe my surroundings. I can immediately tell I’ve been reincarnated as a baby, but I need to make sure I’m Moe Princess’s sister!
All of a sudden, I feel myself being lifted up! I hear a voice cry out:
“Congratulations! It’s a healthy baby girl! This marks the birth of the 23rd Moe Princess!”
And another:
“Oh thank goodness! I was afraid we’d have yet another boy. Now the bloodline will not be lost.”
Post #26
Now i live as a candidate of Moe Princess…
time passed so fast, now i am 15 years old…
One day, my mother came to me and said, “Now it’s time for the ritual… Follow me…”
We walked into an altar, then she told me to lay on it.
“I am sorry… but this is for the sake of the clan.”
I was confused, suddenly my hand and legs were magically tied by the altar.
Then from the wall came out 10 naked man, they walked slowly and surrounded me.
“W-what are you guys going to do?!”
Post #27
“Stop it! Stop it all!”
“What is it club pesident?”
I press my temples in an attempt to calm myself
“I know that I said that any story that you wrote would be used by the club, but this story is just messed up! First of all what is Moe princess? Who was the robot? How come he was reincarnated as a walking stick?”
“Iit just happened”
“…I’ll be calling the hospital”
Please don’t end it with an ending sentence… make it at least followable… because i can just suddenly make something like this…
Post #28
Suddenly, earthquake happened…
The room we were in was destroyed…
Everyone was dead…
Now i stood in front of the god just like the story my member made…
“So, what do you want to be reincarnated as?” asked the God.
“Definitely not a Moe Princess!!” i shouted at him as i imagined what am i going to be reincarnated as…
“Let’s make it a hero…it’s the standard setting after all…,” i said to god.
“So be it,” he said to me as an angel kicked my butt from behind to a hole that suddenly appeared in front of me.
Post #29
“Aaaaaaaarrrgghhhhh!!!!!!!”
Just like that I continue falling and falling. Slowly, I lost my conciousness.
“Uuurg….my hip is hurt”
I open my eyes, but as far as I see just a dessert with no sign of life
“Where am I?”
Suddemly, some weird button appear.
Don’t what to do, I press it and this is what I see
Name: Wakamiya Shin
Lv 1
Job none
Hp 20/20
Mp 10/10
Atk 5
Def 5
Agi 8
Int 10
Vit 5
Magic atk 4
Mag def 3
Luk 77
Skill none
Post #30
I muttered my thanks to God while checking my stats and equipments.
[Beginner’s Clothes Set x1]
[Beginner’s Dagger x1]
No magic or skills were shown, as expected. However, I still remember my Magic and Combat trainings as Moe Princess Candidate. To try it out, I took a deep breath and chanted “ ========== | Body Strengthening!”
A white glow surrounded my body, and all of my stats except for INT doubled. Yup.
Next is to start killing some mooks and grinding levels, right?
This time, I’ll live my life to the fullest, and get myself a harem!!
Post #31
I keep walking and walking
But nothing change
It’s still desert with nothing
I really placed at bad starting point
Just like that, it keeps going for three days with neither food nor water
Finally, I lost all of my power
But, Just before I fall
A figure come to my sight
A blonde beauty on her early twenties
with ‘H’ cup
Contest closed…. Please don’t comment anymore..
Wasn’t going to anyway. I had half of #32 written down before realizing that it’s closing time *sighs* Unless you’re gonna extend it? Story’s getting good.
I know.. However why in the beginning the story is getting so absurd? Hahaha
*sweats drop* I admit nothing!!
Verdict: guilty
Nooooooo!! DX
Oh, it’s ended? I just woke up 😦