2 comments on “Book 2 – Black Core, Chapter 16 – Black Core

  1. hmm…gotta say u have talent in building up the world n the storyline.unfortunately there are lots of unnecessary explanations n stuff that are hard to comprehend. or maybe my English r not good enuff.
    also.
    After a few minutes he was perfectly he was perfectly versed with every at any given moment from the journey>
    delete extra he was perfectly. n feels like something missing after every.
    well anyway keep up the good work.

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