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1. He wanted to lough, but refrains from doing so.
   lough –> laugh

   The Radical Fiery Icy Provocation Qi\Mist Refining Technique and the Seven Stages Of Bodily Refinement were top refinement techniques that made Zetsa unrivaled against someone in the same level of cultivation.
   The Radical Fiery Icy Provocation Qi\Mist Refining Technique –> The Radical Fiery Icy Provocation Qi/Mist Refining Technique
   Is \ intentional? It is better to go with /.

   To say that a slap with her outmost strength would hurt to someone like Zax, would be a big understatement.
   outmost –> utmost

   Essentially, wanting to do the impossible and most dangerous was not profane, doing so negligently was.
   profane?

   pro·fane
   prəˈfān
   adjective
   1.
   relating or devoted to that which is not sacred or biblical; secular rather than religious.
   “a talk that tackled topics both sacred and profane”
   synonyms: secular, lay, nonreligious, temporal; formallaic
   “subjects both sacred and profane”
   2.
   (of a person or their behavior) not respectful of orthodox religious practice; irreverent.
   “desecration of the temple by profane adolescents”
   synonyms: irreverent, irreligious, ungodly, godless, unbelieving, impious, disrespectful, sacrilegious
   “a profane man”
   verb
   1.
   treat (something sacred) with irreverence or disrespect.
   “it was a serious matter to profane a tomb”
   synonyms: desecrate, violate, defile, treat sacrilegiously
   “invaders profaned our sacred temples”

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   • Decided that it would be better to deal with the editing today and write the peacefully tomorrow…

     1. Always confuse the two.
     2. I changed to /, but I think that I mostly get to see \.
     3. Another one I need to remember.
     4. I know that the word doesn’t quite fit, but I felt that its meaningfulness with what I’m trying to emphasize, does.

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