Hello guys… the first revision of the novel is finished… there’s not a lot of differences beside the system..

the system get a lot of rebalancing and changes… because it finished faster than what i expected, i think i can write the next part right away… keep an eye on this blog… hehehe..

thank you for all of your supprot, comments, and feedback… looking forward for your next opinion for the second book.. thank you…

Because of many people complained about my grammar(sorry for that)… I decided to make revision….

there are lots of confusion because of my writing skill… So I’m revising the first part of the book..

It will take some time to revised all of it because of my work, but I will make revision… slowly but sure…

I was hoping that I can finished the revision in a month, and write the next part of the story…

so please be patient guys and keep giving me feedback to improve the story…

the download isn’t revised yet.. I’m planning to do that when the story finished and upload a new book 1…

thank you…

I don’t really understand how to edit the blog and else.. I just think that I should make a sufficient page for you guys who doesn’t want to download it and just read it in the web… so that’s why this page is made.. if any of you guys know how to make this page better, please teach me.. because I’m a newbie blogger… if you guys have comments about the novel, please let me know too.. so, I was hoping that from this blog, I can release the update per chapter not as just one book.. what do you guys think? Any way, thank you for stopping by, reading my novel, and giving me some comments… ^^

Finally the first novel is finished… After going through one hell week to write it… I hope you guys can enjoy reading it and tell me what you think about it… After all your idea, thoughts, or comments are priceless…