Hello everyone. As the title suggest this is an update. The meaning behind this update is that I won’t be posting any more chapter for a while. Now before anyone freaks out there is a reason for this. And it’s not a hiatus…or at least not yet. 😛

The reason for this is to update the story. Allow me to clarify. With the story in my hands I have free reign to do what I want. After going back and looking over the chapters I feel unsatisfied with some of them. Either inconstancy, small sentence error and structure, narrative issue, etc…

So I will be putting everything on hold so I can go back and fix everything. So I hope that you please be patient with me.

Also there’s been a question I’ve been debating for quite some time now. Whether or not I should switch to first or third person. Third person as I find is much easier to tell a narrative. While first person is easy to write but with a limited narrative. So I’ll leave a poll and let you the reader decided what you prefer.

Thank you for your time and I will get back into the swing of things in no time.

Ok guys, i hope you enjoyed the first(technically 2) chapters of First Principle, i’m set on writing tons of them so, how should we handle the schedule?

O my gawd, I actually reached a total of 5 chapters!!! Now shower me with praise and worship in hopes I don’t give up halfway. LOL. (In case you are dense, this paragraph is a joke.)

By the way, do you think my chapters are long or short? So far of course.

The Falcon Immortal Chap 4

P.S. Sefiria update. 11 ready for publishing (coming real soon) with 12 in the works. Look forward to it folks.

So this chapter is the longest and hardest chapter I ever try to translate. My head hurts from this. As a note. I am still N5, so I translate using dictionary and sometimes the internet if there are weird words. I only got formal japanese words education after all.

TL : Unadon

ED : Khh

TLC : Yuki

2. Skinning and Dismantling

Undertale is eating up my editing and writing time… Dying every time a boss appears does not help. XD

Falcon Immortal Chap 3

By the way, Sefiria chap 8-9 have been TLCed as well as PRed by yours truly so you might want to check back and see if you missed anything. I am back for those who noticed the slight drop in consistency. :3

Sefiria chap 9 and Sefiria chap 8

P.S. Grammar Nazis are always welcome. I dare you.