I’m really appreciated if you guys have any comments about the story and about the other aspect of the game…
pardon me for my English proficiency though… it’s not my mother tongue language, so there’s a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes here and there…
I promised that I will do my best to improve it in the near future, so I’m asking help from you guys…
if you guys have some experience in writing, teach me… if you guys see mistakes in the writings, correct me…
I’m really glad that you guys spend the time to read my works… look forward for the next volume…
THANK YOU SOO MUCH…. HONTOU NI ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA…. ^^
Rebirth Online World 
There are* a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes here and there.
I will really appreciate* any comment* about the story or* about the other aspects* of the game…
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I really appreciate* it if you have any comment about the story or* about the other aspects* of the game…
Hahaha I am trying to improve my English grammar too… My mother tongue is Chinese. I’m just practicing by correcting your errors… I’m also not sure if I’m right with the corrections.