18 comments on “TDADP EP 8 v2

  1. Can’t you edit it a little bit more? Your grammar is terrible:
    >He has been treated badly by the villager. The villager is throwing rocks at him trying to kick him out.

    He was being treaded badly by the villagers. The villagers were throwing rocks at him trying to kick him out.

  2. This is a very confusing chapter. One minute he is spanking a women the next he is trying to build a bath? wtf?

    • Yeah.. The author style is kinda messed up.. He likes to change from first person pov to third person without warning too.. I even have a hard time figuring out who is spanking who..

  3. Wow, the point of view from this chapter was extremely confusing. I had no idea who was talking and who was thinking what.

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