8 comments on “Earth’s Core Book 4 Chapter 1 Is Out!

  1. And so he told her, every detail of the past three years.
    I am not sure if comma is needed.

    “Our grandparents, family members and mom’s and dad’s friends are in the hospital, so I would say yes. Take this”. Zetsa threw at him a small key. “Go home wash yourself. I’ll go quickly to buy you something proper to wear”.
    “Our grandparents, family members, mom’s, and dad’s friends
    Or, “Our grandparents, family members, mom’s and dad’s friends
    Or, “Our grandparents, family members, mom, and dad’s friends
    Or, “Our grandparents, family members, mom and dad’s friends

    Marco and Laylen seemed confused at first but reading their daughter’s behavior a thought pupped in their heads and both, for the sake of the baby, had to restrain their reaction.
    pupped –> popped

    “…it doesn’t matter. I need to return for your Master”.
    it –> It

  2. I realized something… You know about quotes that use period and comma on outside and on inside/ Well, actually both are correct. Quote used for speech is for inside and quote used for “air quote” used as outside.
    “You are so stupid.” that’s air quote and “You are so stupid.” that’s speech quote.
    Interesting, huh?

        • air quote is rarely used and usually inside the speech quote but not always.

          Air quotes. A gesture in which two fingers of each hand draw quotation marks in the air, used when uttering a word or phrase one does not think is appropriate or accurate. Air quotes often indicate derision, irony, or sarcasm.

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