3 comments on “The Last Guild Update

  1. I feel it should be written in firsird person. Write in third person but give glimpses of peoples POV (ie thoughts and emotions for more than 1 person instead of just the 1 person or no-one)

  2. Well I think you should use each one in proper places. Narrator and third to very complicated explanations and Lore. First person to fights and for us to conect with the characters, understand them, also when you want to show how someone is OP you should use it.

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