Hello guys~
It’s been a while since I, AmitaKumaradasa, updated my story. Since I got my motivation back up, I will continue my rewriting again. I have put up the newly written 4 chaps a few months back as I think a few of you have noticed. Today I will update one more chapter.
I hope you can enjoy this rewritten version. Comments are welcome.
Click here to start from Prologue
Chapter 4 : Bandit Subjugation
^ both are our new site link
Old Version (read at your own risk)
Enjoy~
Rebirth Online World 
Nice!
Whats the difference between new and old?
In the old version, I put in less thought and research resulting in a few unlogical event and less detail. Typical first timer fault. (I want this and that so I put in convenient but less logical events. Something like that.)
In the new one, I try to put in more psychological issues to give more life in the story. Details on the events are also strengthened. Hopefully that’s the case.
Love this story!!