Neta Chara provisional play-string life Arc (Hen)

11 episodes – emergency

After finished eating lunch, we left the adventurers guild and began to walk towards Miri house. It is located at the ‘noble residences’ in the north side of the city.

When we left the ‘adventurer street’ and enter the ‘aristocratic street’ the differences is like heaven and hell. The road immediately widen and it was like the Beverly Hills road where celebrities live.

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Immortal God Emperor Chapter 13

Her gaze swept into the class, coughed and said: “Although the class is almost over, I forgot to tell everyone. My name is Wang Yan; I am the head instructor for the first year. I believe in the future we will meet more often.”

(TL note: I believe she has the most influence among the teacher for the first grade. So in the school there will be first year normal instructor and head instructor that acts as their leader)

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Rebirth Online World Class 002

Hi.. We’re back we’re back.. This is he long awaited writing clinic.. Not that my writing skill is good but at least there is a will to help you improve right? Hahaha…

The topic for our second class is

Gentyle.. Ups sorry for the bad pun but yeah it was Gentyle.. Genre and style hahahaha…

First thing to consider when writing your story is the genre and style.. Style is a bit tricky since Indonesian language which I’m native at, doesn’t have a past tense grammar so it was kind of hard sometines..

Genre, was very broad thing to defines.. Your story can have multiple genre or focuses on one but please don’t stray too far.  For example fantasy story may have comedy in it but when too much was put in, it wasn’t a fantasy story anymore.. For example, summoned hero is a comedy genre story with a bith of ecchi.. Yes it have fantasy but it was only a part of it..

So you may have a thing to keep in mind.. What kind of story genre will your writing be? Just letting it flow without deciding on one genre will makes it deviate from the main goal..

Secondly,  style..

Styles can be divided greatly, grammar and point of view or POV are one of it.. It can greatly changes the quality of your novel..

If you notice, many great authors used past tense for their writing style and third person narrative and descriptive language.. This is by far the style of the best selling book..

Light novels tend to use first person and a mix of present and past tense since it was to get the reader get immersed in the character way of thinking..

So, either using first person or third person it was your choice.. For example master of dungeon is written on third person and boring reincarnation on first person.. Can you see the difference?

Grammar, well I’m not going to explain a lot about this since mine was bad so I put extra burden to the editor on the site.. Hahaha.. But nowdays there are grammar checking tools.. If only I have my pc or laptop, grammarly maybe one of my choice, word also provides some basic grammar correction..

And since this class a bit short.. I will accept question and answer them.. Hahaha.. Please feel free to comment..

The Eight – Chapter 3

“Ugh, my head hurts…”

I wake up and find myself still in the middle of the battlefield. The rotten smell of flesh and blood is thick in the air. The sun is rising so I should have been asleep for the night. What should I do now? It’s been four days since the battle of the 89.7 battalion of Koldan kingdom.

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