In this world, people were fighting for power. Each kingdom fought with one another, causing a sea of bloodshed that had been sacrified in vain just to determine the stronger side. However, it all changed when a strange phenomenon happened.
In the middle of the battlefield between the three sided war, a fifty metre tall tower suddenly stood erect. Each side ended up signing a peace treaty to deal with this foreign building. They decided as such so that each kingdom had a chance to explore this tall structure. Elora Kingdom was the first one to send an expedition team of twenty men inside but even after one week no one returned. Holy Kingdom became the second, sending a massive number of three hundred men but it resulted in nothing as well.
After two months, the North Ice Kingdom was finally able to conquer it, and the dungeon disappeared. The group of originally five hundred men returned with only eight survivors. The survivors told everyone about their experiences inside it. Various traps and monsters inside the strange place caused many of their people to die. However, it was all worth it, the eight people who came back alive brought out riches and various artefacts with unimaginable power that could change the world.
The news of the expedition spread far. Elora Kingdom, Holy Kingdom and North Ice Kingdom were now too focused on clearing dungeons for the last two months. When their messenger came back they found out that these constructs started showing up all around the world. The strange phenomenon was now occurring everywhere.
It came in various shapes and sizes, therefore they decided on a collective name for these phenomena. Dungeons.
The war has since then come to a stop.
Dungeons, now nobody in this world didn’t know about it. Every kingdom in this world was racing against the other to clear any new dungeons. Each was striving to clear higher ranked dungeons to showcase their power and gather artefacts.
No one knew how many artefacts have been gathered because each kingdom hid this information. They all knew, the appearance of dungeons has put a stop the war albeit it was only a temporary truce. When the next war occured, it will be on a whole new level.
To prevent the war, all kingdom leaders gathered and discussed the future. They decided to sign a peace treaty and form an organization to watch over these dungeons.
One hundreds year ago, an organization called Guild Hall was established based off the conference’s result. The Guild Hall acted as a moderator for the dungeons. Since new dungeons occasionally appeared, the Guild Hall always had an important role to play.
Firstly, the guild hall acted as a neutral faction. They will grant access to anyone from any kingdom if they registered themselves in the Guild Hall as dungeon raiders. This has caused some people to ally with people from other kingdom and has overall reduced hostility between kingdoms. This also eliminated the possibility of any one kingdom monopolizing a dungeon.
Secondly, no one was able to enter the dungeon without a dungeon raider pass, issued by the guild hall. If a person entered a new found dungeon without reporting it first, his dungeon raider identification will be taken forcefully and will be denounced a criminal that has offended all kingdom.
Thirdly, new dungeons will always be explored by the guild hall member first to give it a rank based on the types of traps and monsters it contained. This was the Guild Hall’s most important duty. Guild hall will never clear a dungeon for themselves. They were only tasked to manage it and give it a rank. This was needed because each dungeon raider also had their own rank. They were only allowed to enter a dungeon that was suitable for their rank. If a low ranked dungeon raider entered a high ranked dungeon, it was the same as seeking death. The guild hall was there to make sure that that didn’t happened.
Lastly, the guild hall kept records of all of the dungeons that have been cleared, any newly found, and a list of all uncleared dungeons. Because of these points, people who were seeking fame and power were all signing up as dungeon raiders.
However not all of people wanted to raid a dungeon. Since the war has ended, people life has been prosperous. Peace and freedom filled their daily lives. Each kingdom was competing in clearing dungeons rather than waging war, leaving most commoners living without worry. Altough becoming a dungeon raider had great promise for the future, the rate of death was fairly high.
Thus this world can be generally divided into three types of people.
The first type were those who aspired to become dungeon raiders. Second were those who wanted to live out their lives in peace. The third were the noble families that tries to recruit dungeon raiders to work for them.
In a small village that was full of the second type of people, the villagers all lived in peace. Working side by side to make a better life. Smiles can be seen from the villagers faces. It was truly a wonderful sight.
In this small village called Bruit, lived a former dungeon raider. His name was Gerrard. Since meeting the girl of his life, Sandra, he decided to get married and live free of danger. Two years later they were blessed with a boy and named him Varn.
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did you know that a story with the same name already exists on royalroad?
btw you should revise this chapter the grammer is off in a lot of sentences
Uuh.. I didn’t know about that..
so you put this on royal road an i just saw you on reddit lmao
Yeah hahaha… Need some publication lol…
Thanks for the translation.
Btw. do you have someone looking at the English grammar?
Some of the sentences sound rather rough, that´s why I ask.
Here´s a version I altered a bit in regards to Grammar and changed a few words while not changing the content. I also write “Guild Hall” always with “G”I also inserted a line with — to show the time slip that takes place:
In this world, people are fighting for power. All kingdoms are fighting against one another causing an uncountable amount of blood / lifes to be sacrified in vain just to determine the stronger side. It all changed when a strange phenomenon occurred.
In the middle of the battlefield of a war between three nations there suddenly appeared a fifty meters high tower. The three nations signed a peace treaty to deal with this foreign building. They decided for each kingdom to have a chance to explore this tall structure. Elora Kingdom was the first one to send an expedition team of twenty men but after one week no one returned. Holy Kingdom was the second one sending a massive three hundreds men but it all resulted in nothing.
Two months later the North Ice Kingdom was finally able to conquer it and the dungeon disappeared. Of the group originally consisting of five hundred men only eight survivors were left. The survivors told about their experiences inside tower. Various traps and monsters inside the strange place were causing people to die. However it was all worth it, the eight people who came back alive brought out riches and various artifacts with unimaginable power that could change the world.
The news of the expedition were spread far. All three – Elora Kingdom, Holy Kingdom and North Ice Kingdom – had been too focused on clearing it for the last two months. When their messenger returned they found out that this matter had happened all around the world. The strange phenomenon had occured everywhere.
It comes in various shapes and sizes, therefore they decided a name for these phenomenons: Dungeon.
The war since then has come to a stop.
Dungeon, nobody in this world doesn’t know about it. Every kingdom in this world is racing against one another to clear a dungeon. They are striving to clear higher rank of dungeon to show their power and gather artifacts.
No one knows how many artifacts have been gathered because each kingdom is hiding this. They all know, the appearance of dungeon has stopped the war but only temporarily. When the next war occured, it would be on a whole new level.
To prevent the war, all kingdoms´ leaders gathered and discussed about the future. They decided to sign a peace treaty and to form an organization to watch over these dungeons.
—– (time slip here – everything above is what happened 100 years before the following text) —–
One hundreds year ago an organization called “Guild Hall” is formed based on the conference´s results. This Guild Hall acts as a moderator for the dungeons. Since new dungeons occasionally appeared, the Guild hall has taken on an important job.
Firstly, the Guild Hall acts as a neutral side. They will grant access to anyone from any kingdom if they register themselves in the Guild Hall as dungeon raider. This has caused some people to make allies from other kingdoms and reduced hostility. This also eliminates the probability of one kingdom monopolizing a dungeon.
Secondly, no one is able to enter the dungeon without a dungeon raider pass, issued by the guild hall. If a person enters a new found dungeon without reporting it, his dungeon raider pass will be taken and the person will be viewed as a criminal who offended all kingdoms.
Thirdly, new dungeons will always be entered by the Guild Hall members first to give it a rank based on the types of traps and monsters. This is the most important thing. Guild Hall will never clear a dungeon. They are only tasked to manage it and give it a rank. This is needed because dungeon raiders also have ranks. They are only allowed to enter a dungeon that is suitable for their rank. If a low ranked dungeon raider enters a high ranked dungeon, it is the same as seeking death. The Guild Hall intends to make sure that this doesn´t happen.
Lastly, the Guild Hall has records of all dungeons that have been cleared, of all dungeons that have been newly found and of all uncleared dungeons. Because of these points every person who is seeking fame and power is signing up as a dungeon raider.
However not all of the people want to raid a dungeon. Since the war has ended, people´s lifes have prospered. Peace and freedom fill the daily lifes. Each kingdom is competing in clearing dungeons rather than waging war, leaving commoners to live without worry. Becoming a dungeon raider shows great promise for the future but the rate of death is fairly high. This causes this world to have three types of people.
First there are those who aspire to become a dungeon raider. Second there are those who want to live their lifes in peace. The third one is the noble family that tries to recruit dungeon raiders to work for them.
In a small village that is full of the second type of people, the villagers all live in peace. Working side by side to have a better life. A smile can be seen from the face of every villager. It is truly a wonderful sight.
In this small village called Bruit, lives a former dungeon raider. His name is Gerrard. After meeting the girl of his life, Sandra, he decided to get married and live outside of danger. Two years later they are blessed with a boy and name him Varn.
* I also write “Guild Hall” always with “G”I also inserted a line with — to show the time slip that takes place:
–> should have been:
I always wrote “Guild Hall” with “G” and “H” because it´s the name of the organization and I also inserted a line with — to show the time slip that takes place:
sadly I don’t.. Got editor coming though..
There are virtually no sentences in this entire document that are grammatically correct. Have you considered getting a proofreader or using Word or some other automated grammar checker?
Sorry was doing it on phone and I got no computer.. We have someone applying to be an editor but still waiting for confirmation..
how come when 300 adventures entered the first dungeon they all died but latter when theres alot of them people can go in and out as they please?