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CREEK! –> CREAK!
If strong experts would show up, with his new insight he already had an idea of a temporary rough method to utilize the Kinetic Force as if he performed the bodily maneuvers.
I have issue with ‘as if’ and you don’t need ‘as’ because ‘as if’ change the meaning and doesn’t fit in the context.
WUSH? You might want ‘WHOOSH’.
But when all the bodies forming the hydra losing their connection and the passage of the mist energy that sustained the formation is disturb…
disturb –> disturbed
The vice principal was hit by Zax’s killing intent as if he was a coreless child and ice water purred on him.
purred –> poured
As usual… THANK YOU!
Quite a few changes but very educational!
as if (or as though)
phrase of as
1.
as would be the case if.
“she behaved as if he weren’t there”
I love this kid! Tear it down. Tear it down. Tear it down.